MUSIC VIDEO COMMENTS
- more lip syncing needed add more lip synching shots
- some shots are too long (specifically the ocean scene) shorten some shots and replace them
- video needs more movement eg- shots from a car add shots of a car
- videos of someone playing a guitar could be added film and add guitar playing close up shots
- add warner bros logo and website link at end of video
- cut up clip of map to give a more succinct storyline add more animation
- music video loses pace at the end- random shots which could be cut
- too abrupt ending add more clips which allow the song to 'fade' out
WEBSITE COMMENTS
- tidy up merch page add map as a purchasable poster
- add warner bros logo
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