comments for improvement- NEA first draft

 MUSIC VIDEO COMMENTS

- more lip syncing needed add more lip synching shots 

- some shots are too long (specifically the ocean scene) shorten some shots and replace them

- video needs more movement eg- shots from a car add shots of a car 

- videos of someone playing a guitar could be added film and add guitar playing close up shots 

- add warner bros logo and website link at end of video

- cut up clip of map to give a more succinct storyline add more animation

- music video loses pace at the end- random shots which could be cut 

- too abrupt ending add more clips which allow the song to 'fade' out 

WEBSITE COMMENTS

- tidy up merch page add map as a purchasable poster

- add warner bros logo 

website- first draft

 

music video first draft

music video

NEA UPDATE 14/10/25

Recently I have been creating fake merchandise for my band's website. I began by researching some actual merch pages on band websites for inspiration. I have, since then, crested an album cover swell as a car bumper sticker. 

NEA UPDATE 13/10/25

9.10.25

Recently for my NEA, I have been editing my website by adding elements to my tour page such as links leading to a page where you can ´purchase´ tour tickets from a series of dates. 

11.10.25

I am currently editing my website further by looking for images to add to the ABOUT US page for the band. 

12.10.25

I am currently further editing my website by creating album covers for CDs and vinyls for the merchandise. 

class feedback on initial NEA plan

 

NEA UPDATE 7/10/25

In my most previous lessons, I have been working on editing my music video and sharpening it up. I have edited the scale of some of my clips such as the lip-synching ones. I zoomed in on the actors' face's in order to be able to see their mouths more clearly, allowing the lyrics to be followed more easily. Furthermore, I extended some of my clips and cut others down to match the beats of the music. 

I have also removed some of the unnecessary clips from my video to refine the video further.