Tuesday, September 23, 2025

original feedback on music video and website

 MUSIC VIDEO 


Some clips are too long, especially lip-synching clips, they don't need to play out the whole line of lyric-> action: cut clips, add unused clips

Some lip-synching clips are not in time with the music-> synch clips up

Not enough performance elements-> add performance elements eg- instrument playing


WEBSITE


Contains non-original photos->use own photos for suitcase and stickers


Monday, September 15, 2025

website editing 15/9/25

 In this lesson, I created a subscription pop-up which appears when you click onto my website. I used my house colours to create a sense of convergence between my website pages and the music video. 




Tuesday, September 9, 2025

initial music video clips 9/9/25

These are my initial unedited video clips which will be used for my music video and elements of my website.





comments for improvement- NEA first draft

 MUSIC VIDEO COMMENTS - more lip syncing needed add more lip synching shots  - some shots are too long (specifically the ocean scene) shorte...